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Cortez Cunningham
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PostSubject: Magun Blades   Sat Jan 16, 2010 12:30 pm

Technique name: Holy Light
Type: Light
Technique description:
Using will summon a beam of light form the heavens above that has power to
he some of his Health and removes all unholy thing form his body. Meaning poison,toxins,parasites,and etc. The beam of light is big engounh to heal only one person Which can be Magun hisself or somebody else of his choosing.
Required Strength points:-0
Required Magic points:
Holy Light Level 1: -13
Holy Light Level 2: -18
Holy Light Level 3: -23
Health Restoration:
Holy Light Level 1: +10hp
Holy Light Level 2: +15 hp
Holy Light Level 3: +20 hp
Technique benefits:
Magun recovers some of his HP. Able use this healing move in place that's has some type of light.
Technique flaws: Does take pently of Magic to use. Plus can be only used on person at a time and I can't heal anybody with this move if they have the element of Darkness/Shadow

Technique name: Spear fighting
Type: Weapon
Technique description: Magun uses his spear as normal weapon without using any of his powers in it. He can thrust,throw or stab the enemy with his spear. With his physical training and design of his spear. He can do more damage with his spear than other people with spears
Required Strength points:-10 {throwing} -13 {thrust}
Required Magic points:-0
Health Deduction:
Throwing Spear: -7
-9 for every thrust
Technique benefits:
Go when Magun has no to little on magic left and using his spear training. Its uses no magic what so ever.Uses Magun Strength.
Technique flaws: Not as powerful when I using my elements with my spear. Not as good if I don't have my shield with me. So I can used defense and offense combos.

Technique name: Jugdement
Type: Light
Technique description: Magun will point his spear at his enemy. This enemy will see a six mini stars appear around them and then the starts will explode around the enemy. Causes enemy fair amount of damage and causes the enemy to be in stunned state for two posts.
Required Strength points:-2
Required Magic points: -10
Health Deduction:
-13
Technique benefits: Does fair amount of damage to the enemy and causes enemy to be stunned for 2 posts. While in the stunned state the enemy can't move or uses any of their techniques that requires physical movement.Like a punch or kick. Good because I can use this attack form long range
Technique flaws: Must have my spear to perform this attack. Can't be to in arm distance of the enemy
or I will feels the effects of my own attack.once I used this attack i must wait 5 posts before I can use this attack again. Enemies can use still use their Mental based attacks like mind control or mind reading


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PostSubject: Re: Magun Blades   Sat Jan 16, 2010 4:14 pm

The problems:
You're Holy light technique's Health Deduction needs to be changed to Health Restoration if it's going to be a healing otherwise it doesn't make sense.

Your Judgment: I can understand someone not being able to move for two posts but some techniques can be used without moving, therefore you need to specify they can't use techniques that involve movement.

Overall, you need to change the Type for each one. Your first and last technique would be Light and your second technique would be Weapon. Those are the kinds of things I'm looking for when Type is being asked.{Basically what kind of element is it if it's an element based, if it's for weapon, or if it's for hand-to-hand combat: physical}

Also please check over some of your grammer and words please, I can't understand what some are trying to say.

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PostSubject: Re: Magun Blades   Sat Jan 16, 2010 4:30 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Magun Blades   Sat Jan 16, 2010 4:51 pm

What I was trying to say is that where it says Health Deduction like on the other two techniques, it needed to be changed to Health Restoration since health isn't being deducted. It's been fixed and....

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